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Padded walls
So haunting here
I'm burdened by
A lonely tear
Ripping, Tearing
Can't escape
I'm wounded by
My mournful fate
My mind is gone
I'm just a shell
I'm so scared
Is this hell?
I taste the salt
Of my tears
Immobilized
By my fears
Abandoned by
tHe only ones
Who understood
What I was
I need to breathe
I'm so alone
So scared and Tired
I wanna go home
©2004-2009 ~SlayerChick17
:iconslayerchick17:

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Yea...I wrote this in class one day..I plan on illistrating it...or maybe someone could even offer to do that for me? ehehe...lol

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:icontwilightmelodies:
i love it... one of the middle lines reminds me of an evanescence song
Immobilized
By my fears
but i LOVE that song... so it's all good

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Contemplation often makes life miserable. We should act more, think less, and stop watching ourselves live.
:iconfirecomet:
lol thats an awesome song ... and great poem too ^_^
:iconslayerchick17:
^^ Thank you! It's a song? oO

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Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away

-George Carlin.
:iconslayerchick17:
^^ THank you! Hey...wait...that does sound like a part of that song....lol....well that does happen to be one of my favorite bands too!

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Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away

-George Carlin.
:iconfirecomet:
yus ... ummm *thinks* bugger cant remember wot it is x.x goddangit .... immobilised by my fears .. soon to be blinded by tears ... got it, just had to sing the whole song!! tis the last one on the album "whisper"
:iconphoenixtx:
the image is quite strong in here. good job :)

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found religion inside myself
i drank the blood, the flesh was stale
:iconslayerchick17:
:) Thank you....it's kinda funny that I wrote this in Science Class...lol

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Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away

-George Carlin.
:iconslayerchick17:
*nod* yessum..that tis it

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Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away

-George Carlin.
:iconrefridgeratorsporkin:
i can never bring myself to write in class. my teachers always *intercept* my notes & whatnot, and then they yell at me. which is funny. and i laugh. hehe im rambling. but i like this. it does kinda sound like the song, but i wouldnt really know becuase im not into evanescence.

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